Our trip to meet JLS (not real unfortunately!)

Excitement buzzed in the air, I couldn’t believe we were here. Me and my friends alix and Charlie, stood and waited with my mum, it was finally time for our surprise! A very kind tall lady showed us through to a hall. My mum looked at me and smiled, I smiled back and turned around. I had butterflies in my stomach because I was so excited. A few minutes later a door opened  and  four boys walked through the door. This was the day I had been waiting for all my life…

The time had finally come, it was my four favourite celebrity’s ever! It was JLS! I ran up to them whilst I was screaming so loud, with a smile from one side of the hall to another. I gave them all a big hug! I was jumping around the room and me, Charlie and Alix was so so happy, this was one of the most amazing days ever!

Me, my mum, my friends and the boys, all got into a pink limo and I said ” Im sitting next to Aston!” so when we were all sat down the driver drove us off. Alix and Charlie found some children’s fruity Champagne so we had some of that! I was sat next to Aston and Oriste and on the other side of Aston was Alix then my mum and Charlie sat next to JB and marvin on the other side of the limo. We arrived at a 5 star private hotel, where we were going to be staying for 2 weeks!

My mum had secretly packed my bags and dropped them off at the hotel earlier that morning! I was so happy. When we unpacked and settled in, it was quite late and we were all hungry so Marvin went and ordered some food at the counter and we followed him and sat down at a table. We had some amazing food and whilst weaware eating JLS started to sing some of their songs! We went back up to our room and my mum was taking videos and pictures of us all singing nearly every JLS song from all 4 albums!

I had a amazing two weeks and I hope to see them again some day, it was the best two weeks ever!

our trip to meet Jls ( not real)

Excitement buzzed in the air, I couldn’t belive we were here. Me Olivia and Charlie stood and waited, it was finally time for our suprise, me and my friends stood there and waited paciently for the doors to open, my friend Olivia said “I wonder who it might be in there”, me and Charlie agreed, my mum said “you will have to wait and see wont you?” “yes” we all said. The doors opened we stood and watched the doors open, we walked in the doors, slamed shut, it was dark there was a noise and was 4 boys walked onto the stage it was…
JLS!! Me Olivia and Charlie all ran up to them and nearly knocked them over!! I said to them, “I cant belive I have met you!!” Aston said “come with us” and there was a pink and white limo he opened the door and said “in you get”. I made sure I sat next to Aston and so did Olivia, and Charlie sat next to Marvin and Jb. Across from were my mum and dad werev sat I heard a voice it was Alice Aston rang up and asked to see if we could have a extra person to stay with us and they said “yes”, Aston told my friend Alice and she was that exited she was jumping and made the limousine bounce!

the limo set off and away we went, we ended up at a airport aston, marvin, orsit’e and jb had bucked a holiday for 8 people! me, olivia, charlie, my mum aston, marvin, orsit’e and jb for two week, we were going to abeefer! we walkec on to the plain i sat next to aston the plain set of and we was off!!

A christmas carol review

On Tuesday class 6 watched a Christmas film called a Christmas carol. I thought it was a great film and we got wrapped in our sleeping bags and duvets to keep warm and comfy. My favourite part was when the ghost with the chains on came (the ghost of Christmas past). I liked that we had the chance to watch a film which was great. My least favourite part was when Jacob Marley died near the start. When the ghost of Christmas past came it scared Ebenezer, I rate this film 4 stars because it was a great film but not as good as some other Christmas films . The film was really good and it was very enjoyable. In some parts it was funny but others were sad. I would watch it again one day because I really enjoyed it.


I was always at the back when we went for a walk, but now I was in real trouble. The tree had fallen and I had tried to run. I couldn’t feel my leg, I was trapped, I couldn’t move. All of my family were way ahead of me and I didn’t know what to do. I tried shouting my mum but she was to far in front to hear me. Nobody was around and I just sat there and waited. What could I do? My bag flew out of my hand and landed on the other side of the path when the tree fell, my phone was in it and it was to far to reach. I was shouting help for a while, hoping that somebody would hear me but no, it was no use.

I sat there and thought for a while, I tried to lift the tree off me but I wasn’t strong enough. Then a few minutes later, I heard a noise and I shouted for help. Luckily it was a very nice girl and she helped me get out. I told her that I heard my phone ring earlier and that it was my family, she walked me back to my family and I explained everything, my mum said she was very worried but it wasn’t my fault so I didn’t get in trouble. My family said we could go to lunch and  carry on with our walk. Apart from that tree our trip was awesome!